Words I want to use:
Puke Gross
Vomit Slippery
Squishy Smoth
Slimy Runny
Yucky Stinky
Structure:
See: It was runny like water but we did not add water
Feel: It felt squishy like wet sand
Hear: I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud
Smell: Like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard
Taste: It tasted like puke when I vomited.
WALT: describe
The peas went splatter splatter as the whizz swished them. The paint was runny like water but we did not add water. It felt the paint. It felt squishy wet sand like at the beach. I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud. It felt like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard. It tasted like puke when I vomited.
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