Wednesday, 18 September 2013
Tuesday, 17 September 2013
Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.
what reminds us off
what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like
show not tell
use words that help build a picture
Posted by Unknown at 15:58
Wednesday, 11 September 2013
Words I want to use:
See: It was runny like water but we did not add water
Feel: It felt squishy like wet sand
Hear: I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud
Smell: Like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard
Taste: It tasted like puke when I vomited.
The peas went splatter splatter as the whizz swished them. The paint was runny like water but we did not add water. It felt the paint. It felt squishy wet sand like at the beach. I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud. It felt like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard. It tasted like puke when I vomited.