Purpose: create a story to share orally
Description: Oral storytelling is a Maori tradition. We have been planning our own story to tell on the Marae in Week 7.
Big Idea:
My morale of my story is that smart beats the strength. I am using a porcupine and a lion to tell that storyEvaluation: I don't like my story because it doesn't have humor or fun. I like how it has a good lesson.
Feedback: I like how you made up a story in your own way
Feedforward:you could improve on saying it quicker
Lachlan, your story seemed to have a clear message, but it seemed that there were points in your presentation where you weren't that familiar with your story. You could have used hand and body gestures to help your delivery.
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